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Thursday, 8 August 2019
A Moment it time- Landing on the moon
In writing we had to make a moment in time of the first landing on the moon of course Neil Armstrong was the first person on the moon. I found it challenging to think of how Im going to add detail that would make scene enough for my readers. I found it easy to figure a nice little title it was also easy to edit my writing. I found this writing so fun to do. A moment in time has to be my favorite writing ever made. but It took so long to do and I did it so here ya go....
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