This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In Literacy We Got To Do Some Would You Rather. They Where Some Hard Questions For Me To Answer . I Found It hard To Answer The Hard Questions Like I Said Before . I Found It Easy To Put It On A Padlet .
Hi Harmony I rely liked your would you rather.I liked the one when you would rather help people with cancer then be famous.You brought me back to when I did would you rather with the police.Maby next time you could do some more would you rather but any way it is good
Hey harmony It's me Taylor and i like how you made it good to read.my favorite part of it is "would your rather ban from tech or banned from sweets".but can you fix stuff make it "stuff that is healthy for your teeth"
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Harmony I rely liked your would you rather.I liked the one when you would rather help people with cancer then be famous.You brought me back to when I did would you rather with the police.Maby next time you could do some more would you rather but any way it is good
ReplyDeletewell it is better to help people with cancer then being famous right ?
DeleteThis is great work Harmony but you could talk about why you wouldn't be banned from computer. I really like how you would find cure for cancer
ReplyDeletewell it is better to help people with cancer then being famous right ?
DeleteHey harmony It's me Taylor and i like how you made it good to read.my favorite part of it is "would your rather ban from tech or banned from sweets".but can you fix stuff make it "stuff that is healthy for your teeth"
ReplyDeleteWhat do I have to fix up and I can do it in my spare time ?
DeleteThank you Arwen , Hollie and Taylor for your nice comments. The End I still have to fix up tho .
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