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Hi its Arwen i'm from south hornby school. Awesome job the stormy one reminded me when I was in the West coast. maybe next time you could add more information to sunny and hail cause I know some more things you could put in there like what colour it is.
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Hi its Arwen i'm from south hornby school. Awesome job the stormy one reminded me when I was in the West coast. maybe next time you could add more information to sunny and hail cause I know some more things you could put in there like what colour it is.
ReplyDeleteThank you Arwen I will try next time to add more things to sun and hail . Thanks so much Arwen bye
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